Feedback

After showing this clip to a focus group with the ages 17-18, I have revived a bit of feedback from them. This main bits they said I need to focus on is making sure the person who is on screen speaks a lot clearer so it is easy to understand them. Also to make sure the lighting is right when recording to make it easy to see who is on the screen. I will take al, the points on board and make sure I change the way I record or keep in the points that people liked such as the sound effects and background music.