Well done for getting this in for the deadline Archie, room to make it awesome now you have the shape ready. Get some feedback from the rest of the group and then we can go through your next steps - although the ending is funny you may want to cut just before he swears. Same impact but then reaches a much broader target audience. You still need shots in-between to show school life and the idea for the quiz, there is room to make his training sequence something special too! We are in Mon, Weds and Friday of the first week term 9-3pm. If you could make it that would be great, bring Owen too! Well done!
Well done for getting this in for the deadline Archie, room to make it awesome now you have the shape ready. Get some feedback from the rest of the group and then we can go through your next steps - although the ending is funny you may want to cut just before he swears. Same impact but then reaches a much broader target audience. You still need shots in-between to show school life and the idea for the quiz, there is room to make his training sequence something special too! We are in Mon, Weds and Friday of the first week term 9-3pm. If you could make it that would be great, bring Owen too! Well done!
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